In literacy class, we learn about reading and writing. The point that we learn and I feel that it is so important is an argumentative essay. The reason why I say it’s important is that I understand more about it and I can use it when I grown up. It’s very important to know how to write about this argumentative essay and there how mine look like.
World should ban deforestation.
Thesis: Even though cutting down trees can provide furniture, paper, habitats to human, and more things, deforestation should be banned due to climate change, no or less rainfall and air pollution.
Climate change is one of the reasons that could cause death. According to the goal of world health organization, To improve equity in health, reduce health risks, promote healthy lifestyles and settings, and respond to the underlying determinants of health. Had show “between 2030 and 2050, climate change is expected to cause approximately 250,000 additional deaths per year.” This is a dangerous thing that could decrease the population. According to the theguardian newspaper “Deforestation, and especially the destruction of rainforests, is a hugely significant contributor to climate change” (written by Joseph Stiglitz). This means that when there is no tree there will be more climate change going on. Tree keep us cold or worm by the season and if there is no tree the climate will change to be warmer and hotter. Many people die every year because of heat. We don’t want people to keep die every year so please stop cutting down the tree. Did you know that 70% of our body is water and if we didn’t drink enough water it’s going to make us tired and not have energy which could cause us to die. The United Nations has written seventeen goals for developing countries and hopes that they will be achieved by 2030. Information relation to Goal number 6, which is the goal to promote clean water and sanitation, said that “Millions of people including children die every year from diseases associated with inadequate water supply, sanitation, and hygiene. And each day, nearly 1,000 children die due to preventable water and sanitation-related diarrheal diseases”. This is telling that many people die because they don’t have water to drink. why don’t they have enough water? According to BBC, Over 40 people die of thirst in Sahara. As you know in Sahara there are not many trees so which is the reason why there are so many deaths. Trees attract water from the sky that why it makes rain and if there is no tree there are going to be less rain of no rain at all and when there no rain which mean no water and if no water people can’t live, they might go to another place or you might stay there and die. Imagine if in the world had no trees and people are dying of thirst. To protect this problem what we all can do is to stop cutting down the tree from now on. Tree can also help with air pollution. According to website name ScienceDaily, The World Health Organization estimates that 4.6 million people die each year from causes directly attributable to air pollution. Research published in 2005 suggests that 310,000 Europeans die from air pollution annually. As you what you see pollution kill people, destroy climate change and more things. Did you know that trees can help reduce air pollution? Trees help us by absorbing the air pollution into itself and turns it into clean oxygen. If there is no tree people will die every day and year because there will be nothing that can help us with the pollution. Not just trees can help us, some other things can help us too but trees are much better because tree absorbs the air pollution. As world health organization, said “25% of all heart disease deaths are attributable to air pollution. Air pollution causes 2.4 million deaths due to heart disease every year” as people keep dying every year the population will decrease. Information from weforum, China has sent 60,000 soldiers to plant trees. Research published in 2015 said that 1.6 million people in China die each year from heart, lung and stroke problems because of polluted air. Air pollution is one of the dangerous things that happened and it kills many people in China which is why China has sent 60,000 soldiers to plant trees because they want to protect their populace from air pollution.